How To Get Your Emails Opened + Clicked 👀
Getting someone to open an email is only the first step. A strong email needs to stand out in a crowded inbox, give the reader a reason to open it, and then deliver a clear, useful message once they do. There are three areas that can make a big difference in your email performance: the subject line, the From Name and Preview Text, and the actual copy inside the email.
Subject Lines With Personalization
Your subject line is your first opportunity to get someone's attention. It needs to feel relevant without sounding like a sales pitch.
One of the easiest ways to make a subject line more relevant is through personalization. Using a contact's first name can help, but personalization doesn't have to stop there. Depending on the information you have in your CRM, you can reference a company, industry, product, recent interaction, or another detail that makes the email feel more specific to the recipient.
For example:
Generic:
Improve Your Sales Process
Personalized:
Pete, a quick idea for YOUR COMPANY's sales process
The second version feels more like a message intended for a specific person. That said, personalization should be used thoughtfully. Adding someone's first name to every subject line doesn't automatically make an email personal. If it feels forced or overly promotional, it can have the opposite effect.
The goal is to make the recipient think: "This is relevant to me."
It's also worth testing different approaches. Sometimes a short, curiosity-driven subject line will outperform a highly descriptive one. Other times, being direct is exactly what works.
Don't Overlook the From Name + Preview Text!
While the subject line gets most of the attention, the From Name and Preview Text are just as important when someone is deciding whether to open your email.
Think about what you see when you open your inbox. You're typically looking at three things:
From Name → Subject Line → Preview Text
Together, these create the first impression of your email. People are more likely to engage with an email when they recognize and trust the sender. For B2B emails especially, consider whether the email should come from a company name, a specific person, or a combination of the two.
LeadByte vs. Pete @ LeadByte
Depending on your audience and the type of email, the second option can feel much more personal. The important thing is consistency. If someone has been communicating with Pete directly, suddenly receiving an email from an unfamiliar generic address or company name can feel disconnected.
Preview Text
Preview text is the short snippet that appears next to or below the subject line in many inboxes. It gives you additional space to explain why the email is worth opening. Don't waste that space with something generic like:
"View this email in your browser."
Instead, use it to complement the subject line and give the reader another reason to open.
For example: Are you getting enough from HubSpot? Here are three areas we commonly find opportunities to improve.
The subject line creates interest, while the preview text provides context. Treat the From Name, Subject Line, and Preview Text as one package, rather than three separate elements.
Keep It Clear, Short + Personable
Getting the email opened doesn't mean you've accomplished your goal. Now you need to keep the reader engaged. The best email copy is usually clear, concise, and personable. People are busy. They don't necessarily want to read a five-paragraph explanation about your product or service. They want to quickly understand:
- Why am I receiving this?
- What's in it for me?
- What should I do next?
Don't Make the Email Too Long
If you have a lot to say, it's tempting to put everything into one email. But more content doesn't necessarily mean a better email. Instead, focus on one primary message or objective. If you have five different things you want someone to know, consider whether those should be five separate emails. Shorter emails are also easier to scan. Use short paragraphs, headings, bullets, and whitespace to make the content easy to digest.
Give the Reader a Clear CTA
Every email should have a clear call to action (CTA). What do you want the reader to do after reading the email? It could be:
Book a Call
Learn More
Download the Guide
View the Report
Reply to This Email
Don't make the reader figure it out. A common mistake is including several competing CTAs. If everything is important, nothing is important. Whenever possible, give the reader one clear next step.
Write Like a Person
Finally, don't forget the "person" in personalized marketing. Your email shouldn't sound like it was written by a marketing department.
Compare:
"Our innovative solutions are designed to help organizations optimize their sales and marketing processes and drive improved business outcomes."
with:
"We work with a lot of teams that have HubSpot in place but aren't getting everything they could out of it. If that's you, I'd be happy to take a look."
The second version sounds like something a person would actually say. That's the point. Write to one person, not a database.
The Bottom Line
A successful email isn't just about having a clever subject line. It's about the entire experience from the inbox to the CTA. And don't be afraid to test. Small changes to your subject lines, preview text, CTAs, and messaging can have a meaningful impact on engagement over time.
Subject Line: Get their attention and make the email relevant.
From Name + Preview Text: Build trust and give them a reason to open.
Email Copy: Keep it concise, personable, and focused on one clear action.
At LeadByte, we help businesses improve the way they use HubSpot, from email marketing and CRM strategy to sales operations and automation. The goal isn't simply to send more emails - it's to make the emails you're already sending work harder.
If you need help with your Email Marketing, Hubspot admin or Sales Operations - drop a comment below!